| = thanks Ma'am|
|Good to you, thanks for giving me some advice, you really helped me!!! your few concerns has alot of means to me!|
by the way your work has alot of sense, sometimes it makes me feel that in some other way I remember something in my life!!!
| = joshua, thanks|
|It was just after I submited those remarks about your text and a few others in general, when I realized my "critique" could be taken as a bit TOO impertinent. My intention was just to help the text sound and look better. I'm glad you didn't take it the wrong way.|
As for my texts, I do try to give them meaning, but mostly the meaning comes instinctively. This, however, was created in an egoistic moment (like most of my "work"), in which I felt the need to hide the meaning as much as possible from the outside, untrained or even strange eye. I felt the need to make it as "esoterical" as I could, probably to feel like a mentor of some sort teaching his young disciple something of high iportance through occult means...
| = no-know|
|Maria, i've been reading your texts so far. |
lucid dream, enterprising thoughts, lavish wordplay, the language seems almost an organic component. It is so obviously not meant to be in a self-sufficient way of just being sharp-witted. this "journey" means acutely choosing to stay within or outside lucid dream.
a little suggestion : this construction is too agglomerated [mumbled, moaned and mourned]
your poems follow the same path, interestingly, in rhyme (I used to practice that too). but I like your prose more. the tone is free, richer.
looking forward to reading more texts in your page.