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 =  Prime Matter - Natural poetic ability
Edilberto González Trejos
[01.Aug.05 07:21]
We have the prime matter for a great poem, OANA.
Just 2 humble observations:
It`s "dying" instead of "dieing"
"Dryness" could be used. However "Drought" sounds much proper.
The rest is your natural poetic ability.

SONGO




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