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 =  Nice...Just Accept it!
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[08.May.05 14:33]
Thr rhyme of every stanzas emphasizes the death that is not accepted, just like ( The moon hides her face
digging soil for potatoes
tell me the season.) This statement seems to conclude that he still don't accept the death of his someone special-( friend, family, girlfriend, wife, relatives)
Nice Haiku (FOR ME) One of the best I have read recently.

 =  Thanks my dear classmate!
Mike Tan
[12.May.05 10:44]
Haiku is really best for expressing the feelings that is not for public exposure just like this case of mine.
Thanks josh

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