| = Just try these!! | Jradster Butawan [03.May.05 16:09] |
| Your poem is interesting And I sense something about it that makes me feel odd, but any way It is good, to make it more better try to add more of your ideas :) | |
| = Jradster | adriana anusca [06.May.05 08:47] |
| thank you, Jradster, I'm thinking of what you told me, I'll see if I can do something about it; still it was ccomposed to be a little bit criptic, like a riddle. adriana | |
| = : ) If | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [09.May.05 04:51] |
| If you trying to make A riddle It would be better If You will gonna put it in Guesswork :))) | |
| = Masterful | Edilberto González Trejos [13.May.05 07:32] |
| Masterful So natural it seems supernatural! SONGO | |
| = Wow | Diana Pacuraru [13.May.05 19:00] |
| B E A U T I F U L poem about faith, in my point of view. Such interesting images of christian lies...anyway, keep up with the good work, this was my personal opinion about your poem. | |
| = serenity, diane | adriana anusca [14.May.05 17:51] |
reading your comment to this poem of mine I thought it was about 'If I were an angel'; it's not just about christianity, it's about a serene feeling as well; thank you anyway, adriana | |
| = Apology | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [19.May.05 11:18] |
| sorry for being rude, I didn't mean to tell something about your poem on my first comment, i didnt know that others might have an interesting point of view over your work, I just came here to say sorry, next time I will try to appreciate others works without consulting my own perception about their work, easy to say I won't make them change their i deas just because of my attitude of being the person to mind on others life, for example. | |
| = Simply love it! | Sarang Hae [04.Jan.11 15:22] |
| I read lots of your poems, and I somehow keep on coming back to this one. It's a prayer within a prayer. The word "covered" bears such strong meaning here. Actually I am not writing to decipher or analyse it:)...I love it! | |
| - So open | John Willy Kopperud [01.Jan.11 19:03] |
| to the reader! That quality makes this poem interactive when it reaches my mind. Cheers from Willy | |