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 =  Please write about flowers
dan
[03.May.05 11:25]
“ and way too materialistic society? “ Your make up kit alone equals the annual wage of a third world teenage worker.
Racism.. now there’s an issue. Well then honey bun.. would you date a gipsy boy ? “How many of us are really ready and willing to talk about peace? “ We are all ready and willing. All we do is talk about it.
“How many of us are willing to make a commitment NOW to plant hundreds of seeds and trees of peace, equality and hope?” Now this is so politically correct… it makes me sick. Please write about flowers.

 =  about -isms all over
corina dragomir
[03.May.05 11:48]
maybe the hypothyroidism will just improve things. still it sucks. c’mon, the poem’s mix of populist and mildly discordant indeterminacy resembles ivan tucakov’s f. bedouin in the mojave desert.

 =  Too much
Diana Pacuraru
[05.May.05 22:14]
I can see your point and your uplifting motivation, but it is already turning into something pathetic..Peace is beautiful, but your poems make it boring. It seems like a political speech...Sorry.




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