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+ valuables (for Joshua)
Simona Sumanaru
[23.Apr.09 11:12]
"A real poet is as genuine as gold" you say, "if [...] unadorned". It takes a lot of work and blessings to become self-sufficient, but what a valuable life that is.

You have this accuracy, sincerity, faith and wit in your poems. This is one of the best definitions of a poet I have ever read. I recognized the poet as a teacher somewhere in there as well. My heartfelt congratulations for your entire work, in my humble opinion you will be one of the great ones some day.

PS Maybe you could work on your English just a tiny little bitty bit... it'd be a shame not to get all those wonderful ideas across properly.

Simona
= a real poet..... thnx for appreciating it.
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[23.Apr.09 15:29]
I wrote this piece 5 years ago. thanks for giving a honest appreciation, yes you got the point, as what it says what makes a poet special is the feeling the intense ardor from within that gives power and life to a piece of paper that can either persuade or intimidate. But there is this ancient barricade the so called individuality, each and everyone of us has our own taste and cup of tea, but as what i have said and as what u have figured out a real poet the greater ones can transmit the fierce fervor even if there is this gap that seperates our own interest and liking towards certain things in life from others. A real poet is like a rouge with accurate and strong arrows that can penetrate through inside even if covered by a strong sheild.
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Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[23.Apr.09 15:39]
ps. i forget to ud up this to my first comment here, yes I'll be working on my writing in english, lately I've been focusing on my american accent and impromptu grammar and honestly I stopped writing last two years, because of the shifting of my interest from writing to speaking but now I'm into actual communicating perfecting my tounge like a native american speaker. thnx again for giving a star and I really absorbed what u have said. ^-^
= that was one
Simona Sumanaru
[24.Apr.09 16:28]
of the points I wanted to make. You have a pretty "intense ardor" for a young poet. I'm glad you're writing again, my personal advice: don't ever stop.

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+ valuables (for Joshua)	Simona Sumanaru [23.Apr.09 11:12]
"A real poet is as genuine as gold" you say, "if [...] unadorned". It takes a lot of work and blessings to become self-sufficient, but what a valuable life that is. You have this accuracy, sincerity, faith and wit in your poems. This is one of the best definitions of a poet I have ever read. I recognized the poet as a teacher somewhere in there as well. My heartfelt congratulations for your entire work, in my humble opinion you will be one of the great ones some day. PS Maybe you could work on your English just a tiny little bitty bit... it'd be a shame not to get all those wonderful ideas across properly. Simona

= a real poet..... thnx for appreciating it.	Joshua Vasquez Butawan [23.Apr.09 15:29]
I wrote this piece 5 years ago. thanks for giving a honest appreciation, yes you got the point, as what it says what makes a poet special is the feeling the intense ardor from within that gives power and life to a piece of paper that can either persuade or intimidate. But there is this ancient barricade the so called individuality, each and everyone of us has our own taste and cup of tea, but as what i have said and as what u have figured out a real poet the greater ones can transmit the fierce fervor even if there is this gap that seperates our own interest and liking towards certain things in life from others. A real poet is like a rouge with accurate and strong arrows that can penetrate through inside even if covered by a strong sheild.

= .	Joshua Vasquez Butawan [23.Apr.09 15:39]
ps. i forget to ud up this to my first comment here, yes I'll be working on my writing in english, lately I've been focusing on my american accent and impromptu grammar and honestly I stopped writing last two years, because of the shifting of my interest from writing to speaking but now I'm into actual communicating perfecting my tounge like a native american speaker. thnx again for giving a star and I really absorbed what u have said. ^-^

= that was one	Simona Sumanaru [24.Apr.09 16:28]
of the points I wanted to make. You have a pretty "intense ardor" for a young poet. I'm glad you're writing again, my personal advice: don't ever stop.