| = ...everburning... | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [01.Jun.05 04:59] |
| 'we should keep the coals inside our heart...burning' nice said... You know? I recently found out something (unfortunately 'on my own skin')... I've always given good advices to all of those who were in need of them... Well now, being myself in need,... I can not follow my own advices... Stupid strange thing! Anyway... Liked your poem, the expressions you used... It sounds nice. Keep your creativity EVERBURNING! All the best! ...Bastian... | |
| = Renewed by fire | Edilberto González Trejos [01.Jun.05 16:09] |
| Fire as a purifying element is well used in your poem. I like that part and I am firm admirer of the "Phoenix" Figure to be purified by fire and resurrected from the Ashes. Cheers, SONGO | |