| = shades of silence | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [07.Jun.05 14:32] |
| First of all, you have some spelling mistakes which you should correcting: 'those leaves that fall' not 'those leaves that falls'... Secondly, the poem's essence is quite nice, the sound of meditation hanging around those fallings leaves is wrapping the entire poem in a shade of silence... Beautiful...Good work, but please correct that mistake! All the best to you! ...Bastian... | |
| = ...speaking about mistakes... | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [07.Jun.05 14:34] |
| Speaking about spelling mistakes... I meant to say 'you should correct' not 'you should correcting'. Everyone makes mistakes... Sorry! | |
| = thanks.Bastian | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [08.Jun.05 05:21] |
| I'm really glad you liked my poem, especially its essence and theme. We do all like sometimes to analyze and concentrate on something especially when we call that thing a meditation it is sometimes better to be quiet and solemn while remembering our special moments, even when we are up and downed. | |
| = thanks again | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [08.Jun.05 05:45] |
| To Bastian, I had just corrected my typo awhile ago, by the way thanks again for the compliment. Josh aka death scythe | |