| = ...influence of Baudelaire... | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [08.Jun.05 13:53] |
| And we can see here the influence of Baudelaire at its full power... You've emphasized all the emotions you wanted to express through the text, leaving behind an impression of complete, yet everything that surrounds the word 'beyond' is present in a direct or indirect way in your poem... Very sweet 'Insult' (meaning the poem, what it represents,...and the declaration)! Nice work... All the best 2 U! ...Bastian... | |
| = baudelaire | Breazu Roxana Eugenia [08.Jun.05 13:59] |
| yes...indeed we can see baudelaire's influence..though i confess that I am a more mystical poet than he is...in the sense that although i use words with harsh, ugly meaning to create impressions, my belief is that whatever holds a grain of light can never hide their brightness from the eyes of the everso patient observer...so...if you gave the 180 degrees interpretation of this poem..things are indeed sweet... Roxana | |
| = ...a mistake... | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [08.Jun.05 14:29] |
| I've just observed that you posted this text twice. Guess it is just a mistake... You might wanna erase the other 'version'...it has no comments... Good luck! | |
| = it's done | Breazu Roxana Eugenia [08.Jun.05 14:56] |
| i've just erased it...i guess i was unattentive again...oh..that's just me... ;) good luck! Roxana | |
| = correction | raj thampi [08.Jun.05 16:53] |
| Only sick saliva melting in my "moth" it was a spelling mistake? If, please consider correcting. Regards | |
| = correction | Breazu Roxana Eugenia [08.Jun.05 17:05] |
| oh, sorry about that...it was not considered a spelling mistake by my program due to the fact that the word moth was spelled correctly, though it ment something else...i hope it did not confuse anyone... | |