| = Really Old | Edilberto González Trejos [18.Jun.05 20:58] |
| Are you an old woman OANA? You have captured ALL the essence of old age, you even made me feel old ;o) And in addition you kept and artful rhyme yet you did not "crucifix" the core of the poem as well as its overall sense. I enjoyed the reading. I hope to see more poems of yours, SONGO | |
| = i appreciate your comments | Oana Blanaru [19.Jun.05 22:34] |
| i didn't think anyone would like my poem. when i joined agonia, i did it more so i can read other people's poems. i love poetry, except i didn't think I was any good at it. thank you for your extremely nice comments. i am going to get inspired more often. and no, i'm not old, only 19. | |
| = to this ancient soul of yours... | Breazu Roxana Eugenia [07.Jul.05 18:05] |
| surely...you are older...the your 19 years...Yet...life has given you a taste of its bitterness... "The light that shone is gone. I’m alone, and I reach the end. I surrender. I’m done.." Never surrender...Shine your light through...You will make it... The poem is too sad...and it saddenns me more to know you wrote it...for such great fears lie in you...but, i truly wish for us to have...a brighter future...for everyone...open you heart and your dreams... all the love... PS | |