| = . | corina dragomir [12.Aug.05 08:39] |
| moments or nascent increments of flowing quantities difficult to conceive. retaining the analysis means destroying the preliminary observations. they can just legitimate if under long excessive mechanical isolation (a mature but hostile prisonship of the words with lifespan complacent with the distinction between apparent/recurrent shy controversies witheld by a "league of their own" transparencies. Its a crafting born so long, long ago/where tales drench deep upon the flow/of this sacred bardic way that stems/from earths sweet mantel, life's tender hems/. the aforesaid reasoning farther unfolds whether man is a hatmaker whose omniscience/omnipotence is veiled by symbols or words that might be articulated by a studied negligence wherein absurd dialogues, the subjective logic, less cynical view of the forces of reaction go radically hand in hand with periods of eclipse (concluding post-script crisis). "I coat many colours where the tongue deep and rich/cross the boundaries to tease and bitch/ My craft birthed from the ancient mire/Hammered out upon the blacksmiths fire./" (verbal output, non-derogatory to the so-called "mind slaughter-house")."I am a poet, dressed to season's fate/I am the opener of heaven's gate". The poet (here) admits having no identity, but his sole capability to make the disagreeable evaporate. he is continually in for finding TRUTH. the egotistical sublime is per se on inquiry. engaged in human/universal understanding he proves to have the attribute no ordinary individual was indebted with. the ethics of the "missionary" as you allowed me to infer is possibly brought on no matter the requirements specification graphs involved, processed and engineered in: "Few shall understand the words crafted rich/but then again too few know the pitch. the union language&speaker is transcribed in a self-abolition with seething mystical role. (taliesen-deathbed). welcome back with new postings. | |
| = Insightful Corina | Alisdaire O\'Caoimph [12.Aug.05 17:33] |
| Corina... many thanks for your comments on this poem, I enjoyed the way that you looked within the words to what was , or what it was that I was trying to give and express.. Your a little marvel, enjoyed your thought patterns very much. Thankyou for taking the time to express yourself on this poem.. I truly appreciate it ..Alisdaire | |