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 =  thanks for the graphic
Edilberto González Trejos
[18.Aug.05 08:41]
Wow! I appreciate from the bottom of my heart the artistic edition made for my Text, graphic included,

S.-

 =  .
dan
[18.Aug.05 15:17]
time them cheese bones Louise

 =  Many poets
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[21.Aug.05 13:39]
Alot of poets, Poets from south, north, east and west, conveying their own styles and linguistic approach.

 =  Poets!
Edilberto González Trejos
[27.Aug.05 06:08]
Cheers Poets,

SONGO

 =  Cheer poets!
Andrei Rotaru
[03.Sep.05 17:46]
Best wishes, Songo. Your article and vision r great. I like the way you think.

 =  Humble view
Edilberto González Trejos
[05.Sep.05 16:22]
Cheers to you Andrei.
I am glad this humble view could be of any use to you.
That´s the point.

SONGO

 =  To Songo
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[08.Sep.05 01:51]
Cheers to you Humble Poet..........
a good fate awaits for you, perhaps a reward for your humble approach, towards other poet as well....

 =  concision is the key to rivalry
Petre Calin
[22.May.06 12:54]
Though interesting in its eclecticism, your literary essay lacks the better part of English, that is, the good command of its grammatical rules. Here you have a sample of what you could have avoided had you done a thorough spelling check of your text before posting it on the Internet. I won't say a word about the poor stylistic quality of the English language you are using as linguistic vehicle for your thoughts; poor as it may indeed be, your English consciously displays a level of linguistic naivete that made me sincerely laugh at your efforts of putting down an allegedly good example of essayist literacy, if I may say so...
I hope you will not take this intervention into your enthusiastic impetus as a form of disrespect, or humane ignorance on my part. Quite on the contrary, my good friend! This is my way of telling you you can do better than this, you can improve yourself, you can, ultimately, brush up your English. So, change your the-way-it-is-text to the way-it-should-be-text, adjusting the unadjusted, correcting the uncorrected, and perfecting the unperfected!

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 =  Concise Patrick
Edilberto González Trejos
[08.Nov.05 19:53]
Hello Patrick,

Thanks for taking the time to read my post. I appreciate your comments and will take the on account.
This text is a part of a bigger work that is in project. I am quite busy right now completing and filing applications for Euro Universities.
When a bit more relaxed I will sit down to actually WORK on the text.
All the best to you Poet

EDILBERTO.-
aka SONGO

 =  Subjective considerations about nothing
dan
[08.Nov.05 22:22]
God bless coroners. Coroners dissect. Dead bodies make terrific workshop material. Team up!

Words are alive my friend. As in Living. Breathing. Evolving. Good poetry is as mysterious as heredity. Your techincal report is useless.


 =  .
dan
[08.Nov.05 22:23]
:)) technical

 =  valid - dan
Edilberto González Trejos
[09.Nov.05 01:25]
It works for you and it`s valid.
It has worked for others and may be it isn`t void
;o)
Salut

SONGO

 =  It was the Rites Of Spring
Dennis Edward Moustapha
[04.Oct.07 20:04]
Rites Of Spring. It was. Yes there had to be a riot because the music sounds o my god so horrendous even to my hardcore metal trained ears. That's because it was supposed to sound that way. If the poet decides that his/her poems should sound like living crap that's ok to go. Hell's the limit! So to hell with the show Stravinsky's the man!

 =  Excuse the typo!
Dennis Edward Moustapha
[04.Oct.07 20:04]
:P Rite of Spring :)))

 =  Happy International Poetry Day
Edilberto González Trejos
[21.Mar.07 20:25]
Congratulations to Every Fellow Poet on the International Day of Poetry!




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