| = 50 | Laurenţiu Ion [21.Jun.09 13:50] |
| from now on, you can post texts without editor's verification! read carefully the rules & keep posting your texts! good luck! | |
| = *** | Constantin Delca [21.Jun.09 13:54] |
| goog job! thanx a lot! | |
| = err | Constantin Delca [21.Jun.09 13:55] |
| good :) | |
| = nice piece of poetry | Laura Cherecheº [21.Jun.09 16:23] |
| congrats for your 50! hope I'll catch up with you :) I like "i chop off a bit of my loneliness and give it to you as a poisonous welcome gift" cheers! | |
| = Laura | Constantin Delca [21.Jun.09 16:33] |
| you are welcomed on my page & i wish you good luck! thanx! | |
| = CD | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Jun.09 00:26] |
| love the way you secure the message into bonsai-type poetry. the words are carefully chosen to achieve maximum impact within a minimal format. i would dare suggest 2 things: 'into thin air' 'through empty hallways of memory' that way you avoid the repetition of MY (memory/ loneliness) CD, I am a fan!:) cheers | |
| = ok | Constantin Delca [22.Jun.09 09:25] |
| the repetition of "my" annoyed me as well, now i'm goinng to do the changes you suggest thank you for the visit and for support! cheers! | |