| + "a radio playing behind her the most beautiful song" | Laurenţiu Ion [22.Jun.09 17:12] |
| this can be a place for calm, for understanding a special elegance because these verses are each in themselves precious and tend to linger in our memory. I love the imagery of this tender poetry as well as what is left unsaid & I think that all these images are presented like some immeasurable sequences - you have grace & elegance... well done! | |
| = ! | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Jun.09 18:03] |
| this triggers a flash-back from Silence of the lams when Dr Hannibal was listening to his Goldberg Variations of Bach while smothered in brain and blood and maybe bits of liver. Very powerful, very seductive in the way it grabs the reader and drags him/ her down with it. well done! Corina | |
| = err | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Jun.09 18:05] |
| *lambs | |
| = close-up | Constantin Delca [22.Jun.09 19:39] |
| an image resembling a macabre close-up in a movie, indeed, (more like American Psycho for me) that penetrates the mind and suggests more than it tells cheers | |
| = cold heart | Lee Ann Hardt [24.Jun.09 17:06] |
| I often imagine short videos. This is a slow close-up indeed, mostly noir. I was unsure whether to say "your cold-hearted hot meat" instead of "you're..." and I'm still a bit undecided. Thanks :) | |