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Corina Gina Papouis
[24.Jun.09 19:23]
I kind of enjoyed the forensic analyses of the single, I suppose it takes guts to talk about it, being one:). At times the text was maybe too rich for me, too much info handed over, ‘over-cooked’, and ‘geez’ was irritating!..but all in all I think you brought to light a few issues of the single-life that could be of interest to readers of all sorts.
The ending also merges towards self-pity:
‘I was hurt quite some time ago and my soul was burned.’ – well everyone has had that initiation phase.
So to conclude: for me it was entertaining but not gripping.
Best wishes!

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