| = typo | Constantin Delca [27.Jul.09 19:00] |
| welcome on the english page! it's "virus". cheers! | |
| = welcome new member! | Marius Surleac [27.Jul.09 20:40] |
| Hi George. I read your poem first time on the Romanian page; now in English sounds a bit different. The problem is in the last line - doesn't look well. I would use the next substitution in the last line: "close to the core" - works better and sends the same message as in the Romanian version | |
| = . | Marius Surleac [27.Jul.09 22:21] |
| one more question I have, did you really meant "purport" there in the third line, as well as for the verbs in the last line? | |
| = A variant | George Paºa [27.Jul.09 22:40] |
| Constantin, Marius, this is a test. I'm a "tradittore"-traduttore! English version is only a variant. Thank you! | |