| = =big rain drops...|
...searching for you? You've been away and came back with this poem.
we've been searching for you as well.
thanks for the poem. Welcome back.
| = thanks Gunsel|
|Gunsel, thank you for your kind comment. I was very busy lately, that's why!|
Corina Gina Papouis
|I shall start with something that (in my humble opinion) would benefit from a change: the search for so much to so long|
A poem dipped in gothic and oh, it suits you, Sir!!:)
I think I read similar pieces of work signed by you, however this one seems a lot more focused with one purpose in mind: search!
..for water, food, life – the whole cycle.
the interesting part for me was embedding this message into a gothic surround...
It took me through a few stages: made me think, it gave me a sense of hopelessness as well as a boost!
All I can give it is my congratulations and a star.
| = thank you Corina!|
|Thank you very much Corina for your words, for the tip and for the twinkle. I will change "so much" with "so long" - indeed it's better. That "gothic" you're talking about is a grave's atmosphere as well as a view over time's pass. Also, you're right with the hopelessness.|
| = some few words|
|because I'm in a hurry, but I must say that I love your first poems with Jack and you know that. :) I think you should make a collection - Jack series - that will appear on the front page. of course, it's just my opinion|
| = thank you Laurentiu|
|Thank you Laurentiu for recommendation and for your kind words. I am glad these poems are well received in Romanian and English as well. About the collection ... will be a personal collection probably, but don't want a front page one, because those front page collections should be dedicated to all the members of the site.|
| = strange sensation|
|Now I discover another lyrical side of your poetical personality. Nice poem, Marius, very experimental. Keep going on this path. Cheers!|
| = thank you Diana!|
|There are more to go. Indeed I like experimenting. Glad you liked my poem. |