| = Diana | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Jul.09 16:39] |
| it took me a while to read-and-understand your poetry and by all means, this is not a negative because good things are worth waiting for.:) I think I started to quite enjoy your style of writing. It is more robust yet a trip to ‘Alice in Wonderland’...so down the rabbit hole I go with another good poem. I appreciate the shorter shape, I think it suits the style and it does not lose the reader on the way. ..and yes, I do have a suggestion (more an alternative..:)) Is this bit: ‘love is hate, hate is tears i promised/no more tears’ I saw it like this: Love and hate and tears I promised no more.. Bye for now! Corina | |
| = twist | Diana Todea [31.Jul.09 13:45] |
| I know that I have my own style of writing which may seem difficult for some people, but it's nice you started to see it in a different light now. As for the suggestion I'll take it in consideration. Cheers Corina and all the best! | |