| = for me | Corina Gina Papouis [06.Aug.09 00:26] |
| is a powerful visual, the missing of her, the transposing of that moment into a beautiful reflection, the looking for a way in/out, or maybe another 'hit'. a tormented soul in a melted mirror. I sense the depth of the poet here, it's a long way down.. | |
| + sensibility | Diana Todea [06.Aug.09 08:32] |
| indeed, this is a lyric text, with an insight and a beautiful imagery. i really liked the way you portrayed the "inner" wound, the sensible soul that wants to come out. very nice poem. cheers! | |
| = well... | Constantin Delca [06.Aug.09 09:14] |
| Corina, Diana thanks a lot for the feedback and for your nice thoughts!yes, i'm looking for another "hit", but for me it's the same as looking for a way in/out. and the wound is interior and exterior at the same time, the wound of my tormented soul combines with the big wound that is the world we are living in in such a way that i don't know which is which anymore. cheers! thanks for the shiny one! | |
| = when the wound is healed | Ada Ionescu [12.Aug.09 11:55] |
| Inmost, abstruse, acute. Hermetic and incisive. (Un)healed... in spite of the invisible scar. Regards. Ada | |
| = Ada | Constantin Delca [12.Aug.09 14:25] |
| it's inspired by a passage from Zamyatin's 'We'. the novel was more like poetry in prose for me :) i like the words used in your comm. they sound like some knocks in the door. come in! welcome on my page! | |