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 =  Welcome new member!
Corina Gina Papouis
[20.Aug.09 13:18]
..And what a lovely poem you brought for us today! It’s vivid with images and sensations. I liked its pace and the shape, you didn’t lose me on the way as a reader. Well done and hopefully to many more like this!:)

one little nag: i would get rid of the capital letters from the beginning of some rows.

 =  Thank you
Elena Kostenczyk
[20.Aug.09 13:55]
Thank you very much for your kind comment.
I will continue to publish the poems in the ~ Cry of flesh ~ volume on this website. I really hope you'll like them.

+ beautiful
Diana Todea
[20.Aug.09 16:24]
I like your poem, it breathes originality. One more time I ask you to change the verse: Pacing into the sunset, because you also have a full stop before. A shiny star for you and keep going this way. Cheers!

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