| = Welcome new member!|
Corina Gina Papouis
|..And what a lovely poem you brought for us today! It’s vivid with images and sensations. I liked its pace and the shape, you didn’t lose me on the way as a reader. Well done and hopefully to many more like this!:)|
one little nag: i would get rid of the capital letters from the beginning of some rows.
| = Thank you|
|Thank you very much for your kind comment.|
I will continue to publish the poems in the ~ Cry of flesh ~ volume on this website. I really hope you'll like them.
|I like your poem, it breathes originality. One more time I ask you to change the verse: Pacing into the sunset, because you also have a full stop before. A shiny star for you and keep going this way. Cheers!|