| = Welcome new member! | Corina Gina Papouis [20.Aug.09 13:18] |
| ..And what a lovely poem you brought for us today! It’s vivid with images and sensations. I liked its pace and the shape, you didn’t lose me on the way as a reader. Well done and hopefully to many more like this!:) one little nag: i would get rid of the capital letters from the beginning of some rows. Regards, Corina | |
| = Thank you | Elena Kostenczyk [20.Aug.09 13:55] |
| Thank you very much for your kind comment. I will continue to publish the poems in the ~ Cry of flesh ~ volume on this website. I really hope you'll like them. | |
| + beautiful | Diana Todea [20.Aug.09 16:24] |
| I like your poem, it breathes originality. One more time I ask you to change the verse: Pacing into the sunset, because you also have a full stop before. A shiny star for you and keep going this way. Cheers! | |