Members comments:

 =  =keep it burning...
[28.Aug.09 14:22]
Hi Anna Lee

Nice poem


 =  I like this one, Anna-
John Willy Kopperud
[28.Aug.09 17:38]
-you have something to tell, yet you don't give away too much.
Cheers from Willy

 =  nice
Marius Surleac
[28.Aug.09 20:25]
The simplicity and the wide message make this poem very expressive.

Loved the last two lines in the second stanza.


 =  many thanks
Anna Lee
[29.Aug.09 13:22]
to you all. I wasn't very sure about this one, especially about the last two lines, but if I got it right I'm quite happy. thanks a lot Gunsel, Willy and Marius. Cheers!

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