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= about orchards
Corina Gina Papouis
[29.Aug.09 00:29]
your poem is a vivid image of death, a picture of a last second, or maybe a printed dress among apple trees...
a little nag, I think '...whispered TO her' would sound better.
cheers,
Corina

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daniel aporof
[29.Aug.09 09:05]
Oh, you are very kind! Thanks again, Corina!

Best regards,
Daniel

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= about orchards	Corina Gina Papouis [29.Aug.09 00:29]
your poem is a vivid image of death, a picture of a last second, or maybe a printed dress among apple trees... a little nag, I think '...whispered TO her' would sound better. cheers, Corina

= ...	daniel aporof [29.Aug.09 09:05]
Oh, you are very kind! Thanks again, Corina! Best regards, Daniel