| = Mazhur | Marius Surleac [06.Sep.09 13:28] |
| from now on you can post texts without editors verification. Though, you should read once again the rules of the site regarding this level and pay attention to the construction of your texts: spaces after commas, commas where needed, don't leave spaces before commas - try to brush it a bit before posting and a bit more attention would be great. | |
| = Excellent, of course, Mazhur- | John Willy Kopperud [06.Sep.09 14:33] |
| -that you're climbing the tree of letters. A good thing that Marius adjusted your level. I must admit this poem here pleases me. It contains both pathos and romanticism without leaning on archaic, compulsory rhyming. And you tell a thrilling story as well. Cheers from Willy | |
| = P.S: | John Willy Kopperud [06.Sep.09 14:36] |
| I strongly recommend that you drop writing the title and "mazhur" on top of every poem, since both informations are automatically there when you post your contribution. It does seem a bit corny. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Mazhur | Monica David [22.Nov.09 15:07] |
| Very nice, it's something mysterious, yet romantic in this poem Best Regards, Monica | |
| = thank you | mazHur [22.Nov.09 21:51] |
| Thank you very much, Mr Marius Surleac for your guidance and permission. I hope I shall be able to keep improving.. Thank you John and Monica for your appreciation and comments. | |