| = Diana | Corina Gina Papouis [08.Sep.09 16:33] |
| I liked the angle you approached here, is an original translation of poetry through maths, prosaic, a wonder, etc..etc. The only nag I would have is about 'I've wrote': you probably meant I've written or I wrote. taking that to a side is a wonderful poem! cheers, Corina | |
| = Corina | Diana Todea [08.Sep.09 16:50] |
| Thanks, I corrected the line. And I'm happy you get my point-poetry can be so many things, it depends how open we are with our imagination. Cheers! | |
| = not so sure... | daniel d marin [12.Sep.09 15:42] |
| I should like to read your "best poetry" like a little crazy game, but it's not. It is rather a teenager mind party which is coming to a literature no way end. Your lines do not fit in at all... you should probably improve the field of a coherent idea... too much flight, too much "poetry", too much song... | |
| = experimental | Diana Todea [12.Sep.09 20:25] |
| Thanks for your observations, but this is an experiment. Is not a "teenager mind party". Cheers! | |
| = experimental | Diana Todea [12.Sep.09 20:16] |
| This is an experiment, not a teenager's mind party. I don't agree with your observations because art is part of experimentation and playing. In order to invent something new you need to play with the concepts and set new rules. Cheers! | |
| = just me point of view... | daniel d marin [14.Sep.09 01:00] |
| if you set new rules (within your experiment) with the goal to show me something (any kind of thing that art could do)... that's ok with me. Unfortunately, I am not able to see something like that in the poem above. That's why it is not art, but speculation to me. | |
| = critical point | Diana Todea [16.Sep.09 22:02] |
| Yes is your own point of view. For me your speculation is experiment. I don't want to please all readers. Cheers! | |