= just a thought... | Corina Gina Papouis [13.Jan.10 21:11] |
i think the poem needs a bit more polishing, the word 'love' appears repeatedly weakening the message..I had a go at giving it a new coat, hope you don't mind:): 'my love a flower my soul a gift my thoughts a bunch of prayers you a memory up in the sky an angel Is traveling to Earth scattering people with joy trading kisses for hope sadness is laughing at one another Love’s a winner.. (allegedly)' cheers, Corina | |