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 =  not sure..
Corina Gina Papouis
[16.Nov.09 13:36]
that the length of the text sustains repetitions such as complete-incomplete, tear x 2. those words could be easily replaced. the way it is now it looses it dilutes the message.


 =  breaking silence
raj thampi
[16.Nov.09 13:40]
thanks, can I buy you a coffee? :)

 =  well
Corina Gina Papouis
[16.Nov.09 16:26]
no, but you could write a poem on it..

 =  I shall?
raj thampi
[16.Nov.09 16:33]
Seems quite a decent deal, next time when I break silence, I shall

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