| + derailed... | Corina Gina Papouis [19.Nov.09 13:49] |
| I enjoyed your poem, in fact it really got me thinking about that trance and its consequences...I can relate to the waiting, the patience, the let-go feeling, the contorted view of reality...I would have changed the title into the bugs' father or 'Derailed' Congratulations! a good piece of writing.. Corina | |
| = Thanks for your thoughs :) | Dan Moldoveanu [20.Nov.09 08:32] |
| You know you're hard to satisfy Corina? But again, you raise a good point - the father of bugs isn't really a great title. I do lean towards Derailed over "the bugs' father" - it sounds a bit too much like a mix between "the godfather" and "Bugs" Bunny. | |