| = I shall leave behind... | Andrei - Tiberiu Mãjeri [25.Nov.09 16:38] |
| a very pure poem! i love it ! what I like the most is: "a few piles of neatly folded silences" cheers, andrei | |
| = :) | Corina Gina Papouis [25.Nov.09 17:27] |
| Well, the woman in this poem wouldn't like to leave a mess behind..:)only what was given to her... Glad you liked it! | |
| = When the clock strikes 12 AM... | Cãtãrãu Alina - Andreea [01.Jan.10 20:58] |
| Hm... after reading your poem, I can say that this is a modern type of Cinderella, only that but in this case, "the story" doesn't have a happy ending. "one vague sense of disbelief a couple of unwatched sunsets a few piles of neatly folded silences, the red roses you nearly bought on my birthday" - beautiful classy symbols wrapped in an modernist way:D:X | |