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 =  Absolutely intriguing, Dan, but-
John Willy Kopperud
[19.Dec.09 13:37]
- I can't see the justification of every new line starting with a capital
letter. Your sophisticated poem should profit from another solution, which I strongly recommend!
Cheers from Willy

 =  point taken
Dan Moldoveanu
[19.Dec.09 18:59]
In fact, I believe the reason of the capital letters were the auto-correct feature of Microsoft Word. And... I must confess I didn't pay much attention to it, but you definitely have a point. I will correct it.

 =  In fact this small correction does a lot-
John Willy Kopperud
[19.Dec.09 19:12]
-for the reader. Considering the other obvious qualities of the poem I will recommend this!
Cheers from Willy

 =  It’s like a melody to me
Cãtãrãu Alina - Andreea
[22.Dec.09 13:33]
In fact those "harmonics of a/superstring/symphony' playing in the chest and "The words of a song/half-forgotten/still echo in the back of my dream" seem to mirror perfectly like the wings of a butterfly.
I like very much that antagonistic part between dream and reality, or between past and present.
I feel like I have solved a puzzle!

Concratulations for the poem!


 =  Superstring theory
Dîrzu Andrei-Ovidiu
[27.Dec.09 19:33]
I want to make a translation of your poetry and I am not sure if the word "brane" its mistaken. Is it brane or brain?
Thank you.

 =  Not a mistake
Dan Moldoveanu
[31.Dec.09 00:26]
Hi Andrei
The word brane is not mistaken. It is part of the string theory vocabulary and it means "multi-dimensional membrane". I believe it would be "branã" in Romanian.
I am honored about you wanting to translate my text. Good luck... And let me know when you're done, I'd like to take a look.


 =  I enjoyed it
Dr. Ram Mehta
[02.Jan.10 11:15]
I appreciate ' like time-yellowed photograph

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