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Corina Gina Papouis
[04.Jan.10 15:24]
Hi there!
'you get worried' would be the correct version of what you are trying to say.


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Horaþiu Puºcã
[04.Jan.10 15:47]
Thank you for your observation, Corina! It's more good to write like that, "worry" replaced by "worried"! I found also some other things to replace or to write them good:) Just watch and sign, you or somebody else:)

with friendly,
horaţiu puşcă

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Corina Gina Papouis
[04.Jan.10 15:45]
as a personal thought I guess this text is acceptable. I noticed the attempt of using rhymes which did not quite work out..poetry is a few steps further than this...

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