| = ! | Corina Gina Papouis [11.Jan.10 18:31] |
| the text above was presented here as a follow-up, however judging by the number of errors occurring during translation I found this as being a completely different poem: example: 'he seemed shy' should be 'she seemed shy'..and 'song of a mute' should be 'song played quietly'... and the errors carry one throughout. Please try and stay as close as you can to the meaning of the verse rather than translating it word for word. It is not easy, I know, but practice makes it perfect. Good luck! Corina | |