| = Oh, Calin!:) | Corina Gina Papouis [23.Jan.10 00:49] |
| ....a few minor polishing touches needed: one day - instead of 'on one day' people will go by foot - instead of will go by feet for dinner - rather than for the dinner. and 'not to go to work' - 'instead of not to go to the work' Calin please could you correct these tiny errors so we can fully appreciate this text.. I loved this text in Romanian...I love this text in English...I wonder in how many languages can I love this text?:) regards, Corina | |
| = Thanks | Cãlin Sãmãrghiþan [23.Jan.10 12:09] |
| Thanks. I realise I have many mistakes writing in English, so I do need these kind of proof. When they are too many and too annoying, please tell me eventually to stop. I perfectly understand. | |
| + one day... | Corina Gina Papouis [23.Jan.10 12:16] |
| I might choose to tell you, but today I am delighted to reward this text with a tiny sign of my appreciation! Have a good day, Mr C!:) | |
| = tiny robbots, | Laura Cherecheº [29.Jan.10 22:53] |
| yet, with the freedom of choice, a constant oscilation between to and not to Beautiful poem! Cheers! | |
| = Tiny steps | Călin Sămărghițan [31.Jan.10 23:15] |
| Thanks, Laura. I try to make my way here. | |