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 =  hello u!
Corina Gina Papouis
[23.Jan.10 23:53]
Marius, a beautiful chain of pearls...

I would like to suggest a few minor changes/ not necessarily 'a must', just an alternative..

The servant holly ghost
His Enlightened finer
Stone on stone

Towers of the high
Telling you to take off-here i just though of breaking the rhyme: high/ fly/ sky
The Clear sky

Buildings of granite
Ephemeral footsteps dwelling
Between tides

Fragments in echo
Under stone arches
Rain and sun


 =  err
Corina Gina Papouis
[24.Jan.10 01:25]
is finger and thought..

 =  thank you Corina!
Marius Surleac
[24.Jan.10 11:23]
Hi Corina. Made some changes where I thought it would fit better. Thank you very much for the tips and I'm glad you enjoyed it.


+ Beauty and divinity
John Willy Kopperud
[25.Jan.10 11:11]
Marius! A number of fine texts here, but what strikes me immediately are those images of monastery and cathedral spires, surrounded by the landscape and the sky. With this contribution you have reached a high aesthetic level!

Allow me to say:

For generations
they toiled away until
their metal clad stone fingers
pointed to the very heart
of eternity.

Cheers from Willy

+ :)
laurentiu ion
[25.Jan.10 21:03]
astonishing bouquet, loved the english version!

 =  Thank you Willy and Laurentiu!
Marius Surleac
[25.Jan.10 22:11]
Thank you very much Willy for your wonderful words, for the great poem and for the yellow shine. The aesthetics are due to the beautiful photos Magdalena took, to their arrangement and for the fact that Japanese lyric brought us all together.

Laurentiu, thank you as well for your kind comment and for the twinkler. I'm glad you're back.

I am glad you liked our haiga and I thank you both in the name of all the authors that participated here.

Cheers my friends!


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