| = d | Veronica Valeanu [16.Mar.10 22:12] |
| Deniz, welcome! the text's idea is food for thought.condensed form, controlled attitude. please revise the spelling mistakes. | |
| = ./ | Veronica Valeanu [17.Mar.10 07:27] |
| it's [taken]there. [strained] perhaps, instead of []forced] - it could have been redundant you can edit the text to make changes whenever you want Deniz, i appreciate how much you try to render through words. cheers, VV | |
| = I think | Motoc Lavinia [17.Mar.10 18:32] |
| I do appreciate it as a rhyming exercise/ my daughter is just learning them at the nursery , but come on, it is almost like a rap song. Try to relax it a bit more, play with that rigid form and see what happens... | |