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Veronica Valeanu
[25.Mar.10 19:27]
there are errors to take care of
plus, you followed only a single logical chain of ideas around the same topic - this makes the poem a weak one. take care of building an atmosphere!
and it would help

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Corina Gina Papouis
[09.Nov.10 19:57]
The errors Veronica mentioned above are still there!
Please review.

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