| = . | Veronica Valeanu [25.Mar.10 19:27] |
| there are errors to take care of plus, you followed only a single logical chain of ideas around the same topic - this makes the poem a weak one. take care of building an atmosphere! and it would help | |
| = ! | Corina Gina Papouis [09.Nov.10 19:57] |
| The errors Veronica mentioned above are still there! Please review. | |