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Veronica Valeanu
[20.Apr.10 12:11]
some mistakes
but also some parts that could work as thoughts, not as part of a poem.

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Corina Gina Papouis
[22.Apr.10 15:13]
this reminds me of a song by Enrique Iglesias...however, the text needs a good re-think: do you want/ don't want rhyme? want/ do not want rhythm?...the way it stands now it fails on both counts...
happy ping-pong:)

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