| = think about | Veronica Valeanu [30.Jul.10 11:31] |
| hm Laura, I see this text like a sequence, deliberately cut. meant for contemplation but that's all. well perhaps there should be more to it. think about taking it further on. a text is a whole. which means different plans which do not concentrate selfishly on themselves but allow a defocalisation to a greater plan which can only be guessed. and then we see how ''une touche plus dominante" is sometimes a hinge that may connect with a more subtle plan . and the other way round. I would suggest integrating this sequence into a bigger frame, a non-descriptive one, where this could be a little restrained and work as above. and more- i would see it like a reversal: smb who intentionally messes up the colours + an effect + a counter-effect + the changing of the angle of perception etc. | |
| = . | Veronica Valeanu [30.Jul.10 11:32] |
| and then you can choose if you want it to be dominant or subtle. | |
| = Veronica, | Laura Cherecheº [02.Aug.10 13:32] |
| as you've noticed, the text was deliberately cut from its context, it's just a piece of a larger painting, meant just for contemplation. I know it creates a feeling of frustration due to the absence of a larger picture, but that was the idea. Thank you for your suggestions. cheers! | |