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= typo..:)
Corina Gina Papouis
[20.Aug.10 20:58]
..couldn't fall..
cheers, you
= .
Veronica Valeanu
[20.Aug.10 22:01]
or couldn't feel :)
= Gunsel
Luminita Suse
[22.Aug.10 16:19]
According to the WordWeb dictionary, free to download from http://wordweb.info/free/, and very handy to use, the verb 'fell' has three meanings:
1. Cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow
2. Pass away rapidly
3. Sew a seam by folding the edges
So, I hope this clears away the typo confusion.
Looking at the style of this poem, 5 verses, I wondered if it is a tanka attempt? If so, you may reconsider using the same verse it was [only] a dream twice for the sake of tanka perfection which uses few words and aims at deepness.

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= typo..:)	Corina Gina Papouis [20.Aug.10 20:58]
..couldn't fall.. cheers, you

= .	Veronica Valeanu [20.Aug.10 22:01]
or couldn't feel :)

= Gunsel	Luminita Suse [22.Aug.10 16:19]
According to the WordWeb dictionary, free to download from http://wordweb.info/free/, and very handy to use, the verb 'fell' has three meanings: 1. Cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow 2. Pass away rapidly 3. Sew a seam by folding the edges So, I hope this clears away the typo confusion. Looking at the style of this poem, 5 verses, I wondered if it is a tanka attempt? If so, you may reconsider using the same verse it was [only] a dream twice for the sake of tanka perfection which uses few words and aims at deepness.