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Veronica Valeanu
[28.Aug.10 10:31]
the idea of those cinema seats is great!

there would be no damage to the poem if you only kept [the piano divides]
[ghost] is not so obvious there in terms of perpetrating things.
on the other hands, it could be perfect in another place:
[nailing us ghosts]

so, here comes your prolific period again!

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Veronica Valeanu
[28.Aug.10 10:32]
on the other hand

 =  Thanks a lot for comment and advice, Veronica!
John Willy Kopperud
[28.Aug.10 13:07]
I hope to mold this short one into a better version by taking your suggestions into account.
Cheers from Willy

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Lelia Vatasescu
[15.Apr.11 19:49]
flawless sound, alluring imagery. I really like this.

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