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|the idea of those cinema seats is great! |
there would be no damage to the poem if you only kept [the piano divides]
[ghost] is not so obvious there in terms of perpetrating things.
on the other hands, it could be perfect in another place:
[nailing us ghosts]
so, here comes your prolific period again!
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|on the other hand|
| = Thanks a lot for comment and advice, Veronica!|
John Willy Kopperud
|I hope to mold this short one into a better version by taking your suggestions into account.|
Cheers from Willy
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|flawless sound, alluring imagery. I really like this.|