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Corina Gina Papouis
[14.Aug.20 01:00]
It needs a bit more...poetry to be poetry :)
It's too blunt and lacks vision as it presents itself completely bare of metaphor.
Tip: read more poetry it will refine the senses and boost imagination.

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