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Veronica Valeanu
[17.Nov.10 17:02]
skin, not skins

i suggest you to eliminate the last 4 lines
plus - make it more compact
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Costin Tanasescu
[17.Nov.10 17:50]
no way, it's "skins". i cant kill the meaning of the poem(i'm talking about the last four lines). thank you.
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Corina Gina Papouis
[17.Nov.10 17:56]
skin might sound better in English but not if the author denies it..it was about the skin of two people...the decision is entirely his...I mean yours..:)

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= .	Veronica Valeanu [17.Nov.10 17:02]
skin, not skins i suggest you to eliminate the last 4 lines plus - make it more compact

= .	Costin Tanasescu [17.Nov.10 17:50]
no way, it's "skins". i cant kill the meaning of the poem(i'm talking about the last four lines). thank you.

= either way...	Corina Gina Papouis [17.Nov.10 17:56]
skin might sound better in English but not if the author denies it..it was about the skin of two people...the decision is entirely his...I mean yours..:)