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 =  fair
Veronica Valeanu
[28.Dec.10 19:27]
I particularly liked this part [Spoke fair to me, my tongue]
the text ends so abruptly like a resignation I think I can feel loneliness
hey but loneliness sometimes is a time for finding your true self
which is to be cherished

+ sound effects
Diana Todea
[02.Jan.11 12:47]
A very nice composition. I give it a star for the sound effects... even though you stand alone in 2011. Have a happy 2011! Cheers, Diana.

 =  Rhytmically consequent
John Willy Kopperud
[02.Jan.11 12:58]
threeliners, a somewhat classical structure without the conventional rhyming. Musical piece, enjoyed it!

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