| = w | Veronica Valeanu [07.Jan.11 10:17] |
| pressurized :) try this:[there]instead of [it]was time for death -it doesn't double up the effect of [it was time for bed]- | |
| = I see your point, Veronica | John Willy Kopperud [07.Jan.11 10:17] |
| -thank you very much! Cheers from Willy | |
| + think today is bad? try yesterday! | ion a [07.Jan.11 19:42] |
| liked it too, all people nostalgic over the terrible old days would go crazy within a month if they could live that, with no running water, no electricity, no entertainment, bed bugs and fleas, epidemics, etc i don't know, the last verse might be a little superfluous, the irony is already plainly visible in the rest of the poem regards | |
| = Thanks a lot for your appreciation, ion- | John Willy Kopperud [08.Jan.11 13:12] |
| -I do think you may be right regarding the last couple of lines. I will look the poem over during the weekend. Cheers from Willy | |