| + shredded | dan marius [05.Jan.11 14:00] |
| because it feels like I'm there. "you sit and stay still". loved its force. | |
| + shred and burn, a new year has come | ion a [06.Jan.11 06:34] |
| i think it's a promising turn as far as the "voice" goes, more subdued, more natural, bringing forth more of an implied, experiential depth rather than the "clinical" precision of introspection. liked best "words are falling into crumbs on the floor" | |
| = shr | Veronica Valeanu [06.Jan.11 12:34] |
| DM, coldness is a freeze-frame. of different types of power :) thank you so much Ion, you are so right about that clinical driveway... hmm, that's a sensitive spot and it's good to know a big thank you | |
| = my lucky day | Motoc Lavinia [06.Jan.11 13:13] |
| Liked the new you- as Ion very well puts it. No big words( apart from enourmously, of course!), but so real and convincing. | |
| = L | Veronica Valeanu [08.Jan.11 12:34] |
| this was initially a poem on my Romanian page. That's true, I think in a totally different way in Romanian. Thank you for following my work,Lavinia. cheers, VV | |
| = * | Dely Cristian Marian [24.Jan.11 20:37] |
| an interesting way to hang the hunger of love: I think we should overlook love, especially as it is but natural to eat first. I like it, although I only agree that the lack of food as well as the lack of love would make most people feel awful. cheers, cristian | |
| = . | Veronica Valeanu [25.Jan.11 15:36] |
| i found that tension to be a good ingredient for my poem especially that it involves a certain kind of attitude: minimalist, cold, indifferent but totally opposite on the inside thank you | |