= little sermon... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [03.Jun.11 19:13] |
Nice forwarding of an evangelistic thought. Clarity of thought, but tight bound by the goal of presenting a faith message. I would suggest "When coins of wisdom glimpse from his chest", as "glimpse" seems in subordination to the "coins" and not the "chest". rcm | |
= R. C. M., | Murza Narcis Ioel [05.Jun.11 16:47] |
Thank you for visiting and for your advice, I accept your suggestion. Now,even ”Chronicles of Narnia” seem to be a long and wonderful sermon..:) C. S. Lewis remains an inspirational character for me, It is a pleasure to meet you, hope we will meet someday....if not here, in a renewed ”Narnia” :) God bless you and your work everywhere you are! Narcis Murza | |