| = Painting Sea's in Oil Colours | Wendy Mary Lister [17.Sep.11 10:14] |
| Really do like the last stanza, lovely flow to your poem Sarb, | |
| = Gratitude | Sârb Olimpia [18.Sep.11 08:31] |
| Though the previous lines do not seem so "glamorous", they play their important part in the poem, they prepare the reader to welcome the surprise of Beauty. Proportionately speaking, a poem is similar to a many-faceted diamond...Its faulty facets show the core of the poem to advantage. Thank you very much, Wendy, to view this with a friendly eye. Olimpia | |
| = Painting Seas In Oil Colurs | Wendy Mary Lister [24.Sep.11 21:48] |
| Your most welcome Sarb, I enjoyed the whole poem, as you said 'It prepared the reader to indulge the beauty.' Stunning. I love Art, and I could feel the scenery as if viewing an Oil painting, which compliments very well. | |