| = "Ode to Myself" | Wendy Mary Lister [24.Sep.11 14:34] |
| Rhymes beautifully....nice work | |
| = It is. | Helena [26.Sep.11 20:36] |
| It is like taking a bite out of words that have been sweetend for our enjoyment. | |
| = nothing is more beautiful than a rotting log on the ground with the bark half ha | Robin Asher [28.Dec.11 21:16] |
| I like the "And welcome the beatings of gales" line most, a very nice finale to the poem, which describes the aging process very powerfully, but ends on a more hopeful note, like it is natural and OK. | |