| = Nice poem | Luminita Suse [21.Jan.12 03:35] |
| You do as well in short poetry as in prose! in the coffee shop bright poppies seep out from a terra-cotta wall crimson stars against the moonlight A coffee shop is a fascinating place. I have written a few tanka about it. Here's one: crowded café my iced tea inches away from his hot dark coffee | |
| = Re: Nice Poem | James A Williams [21.Jan.12 06:08] |
| Re: Nice Poem That is quite the compliment considering from whence it comes! I love what you did with it, and your tanka, coffee shop poem, is fantabulous. Of course I've also written much prose in my local coffee shop you may be sure. Thanks for your kind, encouraging words. jaw | |