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 =  please reconsider...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[30.Jan.12 14:25]
Hi Katy,

Before anything else please consider the following:

"behind a hill end." shouldn't it rather be "hill's end"?
"But if you not going to be happy," shouldn't it rather be "you're not going to..."?

Also the end's question seems to be either unfinished or left unchanged after an alteration of last two lines...?

I'll be back:-)

rcm




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