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+ Perfectly
John Willy Kopperud
[17.Jun.12 13:52]
-ominous bliss, at first in a casual mood, till it really hits me in the last lines. Congratulations, Dan!
Cheers from Willy

 =  thanks a lot
dan marius
[18.Jun.12 16:09]
yellow stars, red stars and everything :) thanks. I'm certainly not wasting time here :D

 =  blissful gravitas
Ronald E Shields
[08.Jul.12 18:45]
you had me feeling blissfully numb until the last 5 lines when bliss becomes a word with real gravity. excellent shift of tone in my opinion.

 =  .
dan marius
[17.Jul.12 11:38]
thanks. glad you liked it

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