| + Perfectly | John Willy Kopperud [17.Jun.12 13:52] |
| -ominous bliss, at first in a casual mood, till it really hits me in the last lines. Congratulations, Dan! Cheers from Willy | |
| = thanks a lot | dan marius [18.Jun.12 16:09] |
| yellow stars, red stars and everything :) thanks. I'm certainly not wasting time here :D | |
| = blissful gravitas | Ronald E Shields [08.Jul.12 18:45] |
| you had me feeling blissfully numb until the last 5 lines when bliss becomes a word with real gravity. excellent shift of tone in my opinion. | |
| = . | dan marius [17.Jul.12 11:38] |
| thanks. glad you liked it | |